[quote=@Manticore] I like that one. It's totally Mori's style to save wolves from abusive leaders. So yeah, we can go with that :) And about Ryan dating a non-werewolf... I don't know actually. She would definitely have a problem with his agressive behaviour, as she wants her family to be at peace with each other, but I'd say she would be ok with it. Well, she would definitely keep an eye on them, but wouldn't bother him about it every chance she got. All in all, I think they could get along pretty well. Unless you want it otherwise :P [/quote] Alrighty then! I'll rewrite the CS to reflect that. My thing is I want to have a point of conflict with Mori over something. If everyone is happy and healthy together, then the story stalls and peters out. I don't imagine them having a knock down drag out fight about their relationship, but I think it's something we could use to add some drama to the pack :P