[quote=@Trinais] I'll rewrite the CS to reflect that. My thing is I want to have a point of conflict with Mori over something. If everyone is happy and healthy together, then the story stalls and peters out. I don't imagine them having a knock down drag out fight about their relationship, but I think it's something we could use to add some drama to the pack :P [/quote] That's a valid point there. Hmm...what if they became really good friends after Mori saved Ryan from Topeka, but then their relationship had to change due to Mori becoming an alpha. So maybe Ryan still treats her as his best friend, and expects her to be ok with whatever he does. So Mori is kind of torn apart between being his friend, and being a leader. Still not enough conflict? :P That's all I can think of right now, but I might get a better idea later.