[quote=@whizzball1]
Lines of the song so far! =D

[i]Welcome to a new world[/i]'s what they say.
What if a new world is not for us?
The creatures of this place they did belay.
All they seemed to do to us was crush.

A "welcome" to a new world? Where is that? (Where is that?)
No one's told us what we need to do. (What to do...)
How hard is it to find a little chat?
They didn't leave us with a single clue. (Not a clue.)

We thought this world could be ours... (We think this world could be yours...)
But now we don't belong.

Dear me! (Welcome to a new world!)
Dear me! (It's great to have you here!)
Dear me! (Know that you belong!)
Where did we go wrong?
We've failed. (Try another shot now.)
We can't! (How can you know that?)
We shan't! (Maybe you'll be wrong!)
Now we don't belong.

Welcome to a new world--yes, it's new,
So different, and we never could have guessed
That everything we knew would just fall through:
The very most of different manifest.

Rhythm: (Single dashes signify a very short pause. Spaces signify a regular pause. Underscores signify a slightly longer pause. Double dashes signify a noticeably longer pause.)
Wel-- come to-- a new-- world's what-- they say.
(Same for the rest of this verse and the next one.)
We thought-- this-- world... could be ours. (We think this world could be yours has the same rhythm and starts at "be".)
But now-- we-- don't-- be-- long... ("long" is drawn out.)
Dear_me! (Wel-come-to-a-new world)
Dear_me! (It's great_to have_you here.)
Dear_me! (Know_that you_belong.)
Where_did we_go wrong?
(Same rhythm set for the second part of the chorus.)
(Same rhythm set as the first and second verses for the third verse.)

Is it good so far, David? (And anyone else who happens to read it)
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I'd have to hear it to tell you that.