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Appearance: He is tall and muscular though he does not work out it is merely worked into his physiology, he has long dark hair that he pushes back behind his head. He has greenish gray eyes and a small scar over his right eye. He has a tattoo of 1624 on his right forearm which is what he will introduce himself as. 

[b]I prefer pictures but that's a nitpicky thing[/b]

Name: Project 1624

Alias: None

Race: Clone of an elf and human hybrid.

Nationality: Lyranian.
[b]Lyranias isn't the continent to be spitting out clones, IIRC. Pitover or Island Nation would be better. Unless this is where his 'original' came from[/b]

Occupation: He has no occupation and is currently seeking clues as to who he is. 

Age: 21
[b]There is a thing here I was going to mention here, but I forgot over the song change.

Oh right, so is this his legit age or his biological age? Since I'd assume a clone would have accelerated aging to be useful quicker rather than having to wait X amount of years.[/b]

Gender: Male

Specialty / Skill: He is good at cooking though he does not know how, he is also gifted with instant combat reflexes however he loses sight of his goals in combat other than to neutralize his opponent. 

[b]So how instant is instant?[/b]

Personality: He is commonly a shy person but can be flirtatious at times. If provoked he will likely be hostile or conflict with whomever stands in his way. He prefers to avoid contact with other people as he suspects people to shun him and or harm him.

[b]>Shy and avoids contact with other people
>Flirtatious

I cannot see that combination working out, at all. Also, this seems a bit on the short side. [/B]

Ability: He is prone to act as though in combat which gives him instant reflexes if attacked or if he hears a sound he does not recognize as familiar. However he cannot always control it and will likely harm someone if they were to accidentally trip and or wake him in his sleep. His bones are near unbreakable as well as increased strength and stamina due to his enhanced physiology. 

[b]Well he must hate amusement parks and horror movies[/b]

Others: He does not like being given orders and commonly seeks to avoid situations where he is not in control. He seeks the man he is cloned after and generally anyone who'm can help him survive and find out more about himself. Not knowing his true name he does not give any name and if he is comfortable enough will tell his story.

[b]So THERE'S where the rest of the Personality went. Though I feel you could mesh the personality traits together better.

Also, he doesn't sound like a very good Super Soldier, I can see why they left him what with the insubordinate personality.[/b]
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I [i]hope[/i] my usual review style still works. Is the Bold formatting there?