[quote=@whizzball1] That's a pseudo-poem. It had rhymes but not rhythm. The rhythm is the challenge. [/quote] There was certainly rhythm. I had an AP English teacher to attest to that, as well as the fact that I used Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" as a guide to the format of it. [quote=@Etcetera] No. I would have written it faster, but I'm also taking a test. [@Heroic] It's good. Nice job. [/quote] Thanks.