[quote=@whizzball1]
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This is what meaningful writing I could get out in 5 minutes.

Lightning crackles through the air and sings
A song too slow for anyone to hear
But soon enough within our ears it rings
The lightning dulled to nothing but a blear.

I considered trying to make another two lines, but couldn't think of anything for after "The facet of the storm that is its king." Alas.
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Your rhythm is off and it's not meaningful because you wrote it to write it.

[quote=@Heroic]
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There was certainly rhythm. I had an AP English teacher to attest to that, as well as the fact that I used Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven" as a guide to the format of it.

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Thanks.
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AP English is a paradox in itself.