[quote=@Etcetera] Your rhythm is off and it's not meaningful because you wrote it to write it. AP English is a paradox in itself. [/quote] But I didn't write it to write it. An idea actually did pop up in my head, which is why I decided to put a stopwatch on myself to see how long it'd take me to make that idea into a poem. Also, it's iambic pentameter all the way through, except for the omission of one syllable at the beginning of the first and last (Never is it any less than mere) line. [quote=@Heroic] Wat [/quote] There's more than sixteen syllables in some lines of the poem, so I can't figure out how to say it.