[quote=@Etcetera]
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Your rhythm is off and it's not meaningful because you wrote it to write it.

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AP English is a paradox in itself.
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I agree.

[quote=@whizzball1]
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But I didn't write it to write it. An idea actually did pop up in my head, which is why I decided to put a stopwatch on myself to see how long it'd take me to make that idea into a poem. Also, it's iambic pentameter all the way through, except for the omission of one syllable at the beginning of the first and last (Never is it any less than mere) line.

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There's more than sixteen syllables in some lines of the poem, so I can't figure out how to say it.
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It's written, and I'm not sure what you call this, but the line pattern is ABCBBB. The A and C have sixteen syllables and the Bs merely need to rhyme.