Speaking of writing styles, mine differs quite a bit when I'm not the GM. It can get a bit flowery and Latinate. However, when you are the one directing things, it's all about clarity and being concise, in my opinion.

I think the best results in a roleplay of this kind comes from a degree of character exaggeration, so don't be afraid to portray your character in such a way, like [@clericbeast] did with Aurelia.

[@DJAtomika] That's from Titanfall? Okay, I had no idea. I have tons of concept art from various sources, so I just stopped checking from where or what they're of. Anyway, glad you like it!

[@bluejay_gl] I almost tried to click Wren's dialog, hah! Because the color is similar to the color of links on the forum.