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I like the idea of combining powers by the way, though it would have to be one person controlling them, and maybe only two at a time. (Otherwise we could give Edgar all five stones and he could magic everyone to death) It could also be very, very taxing on the user and overuse could even lead to comatose/death
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This is true. After all, his father was a good man at first.

[@Manticore]
 I apologized for the errors that I had. I totally rushed the revised edition of it, as I didn't want to keep you guys (and myself) waiting for far too long. But I have fisxed it, and even went to add visual descriptions for something such as the gem stone, and weapons and such.

As far as the powers go, there are still more I was wishing to add, but I don't want to over-cumber the list at the moment. And I was considering actually putting descriptions of each power as to not confuse the reader. I'll get to that another time though. =]

I'm going to start the post here shortly. Tending to an elderly is a daily routine for me right now, until I can land a job (which should be next week. Pray for me).