[@fantasyfan28] Your CS is nearly there, but I have a few observations. 1. You never said which realm Andor belongs to. Going by the names and the general feel, I am going to assume Elinor. Do mention it somewhere in your post. 2. You mentioned easy-going as a character trait. But I don't see how someone overzealous and stubborn can be easy-going. Add to that being honorable and you will have a person who cannot stand his morals/judgement/methods being questioned. You might want to reconsider that. 3. When you say 'not completely trained in herblore', what do you mean? What are his limits? Can you give some instances, such as "He can find herbs to put a salve on minor wounds but cannot handle anything more than a nick" etc? 4. With regards to languages, my fault I haven't mentioned it in the main OOC post. I should say that the fair-skinned northerners (the Elinorans, the Carmalans and the Chironi) speak the same language, though the Chironi have dialect/accent differences. The Dunmen speak a different language, but the northern language (called the Common Tongue) is known by almost everyone. So, my point is, language is not going to be a barrier in this world and thus not an exceptional skill. If you guys feel otherwise, I am willing to reconsider of course!