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@clericbeast@Brimmlocke Yeah, how are those CSs going? I'm getting impatiently excited to read them ;)
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Today was sorta hell for me. I am just getting to a computer. I am so sorry for the wait. I have been busy since 9 am my time. Its almost done I swear it. I'm slightly further than I was when I posted about it being doing last. I have to finish out the bio, and fighting style. I will keep you patient people waiting no longer!!! And thanks for having nerves of steel!!
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@Brimmlocke Wow you really did an amazing job! Totally worth the wait :D I have no doubt you'll be excellent at playing the prince.

There's just a few things I ask you to edit in your CS:

Firstly, In the part you speak about Edgar having a nightmare about his father's deal with the witch - it wasn't Shi'larra, whom he made a deal with, it was Moriana, also known as the evil Witch of Eddor'had. Shi'larra is my Sorceress, and the one who sent Prince the message of his father's deal in a form of dreams, and who is now patiently waiting for all of you to appear at Kiring Taq (see IC).

Secondly, although I adore what you did with the gemstone related powers (there is a lot of them, and I don't even know what some of them mean :D), I want you to restrict their usage on the person in front of you (only one at the time!). In other words, I don't want Edgar to be cabaple of long distance mind control and stuff. At least not yet, because if it were that easy, he could intrude Evil Witch's mind, and sent her over the cliff, making our problem easily solved :) Also, you don't have to list any more specific powers. You have more than enough of them, actually too many. I would remove the following ones: Cosmic Awareness, Precognition, Psionic Equilibrium Distortion, Psionic Inundation, Psionic Shield, Psychic Constructs, Psychic Navigation, Psychic Shadow, Psychometry, Pushing. Some they seem just too powerfull to start with, and some would need further explanation, because I don't know what exactly they mean. You don't have to delete them, just cross them, and leave them for further reference. Thanks!

Anyway, can't wait to see Prince in the action, though!

Now, you're welcome to post in the IC, and join the party ;)
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I like the idea of combining powers by the way, though it would have to be one person controlling them, and maybe only two at a time. (Otherwise we could give Edgar all five stones and he could magic everyone to death) It could also be very, very taxing on the user and overuse could even lead to comatose/death
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@RPforthatPR We will definitely do that sometime later in the story. I have some hard challenges in store for our characters, so they will be sort of forced to collaborate in such way. For now, the idea is to start easy, and then develop new abilities, figuring out how to combine the two stones to work together, and so on.
Oh, Edgar wouldn't dare to take all five of them. If he was smart enough not to do that when he first got them, I'm sure he'll restrain from doing that now :D
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@Manticore You said I should edit my IC because Alexis character has changed. Where can I see the new changes? What part of my IC should I be editing?
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@Incanus Actually, it is now even more minor than I initially thought. It's the notion of Alexis having a small blue gem in the hilt of the longsword. But since @Jinxer didn't edit that, I'm not sure whether he just forgot to, or could the gem be explained in some other way (like it's just an ordinary gem, an accessory, a symbol of their kingdom), I suggest you wait with the editing for now. Sorry for the inconvenience :)
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I have now edited my IC post - all I needed to do was remove the part about the gem. Sorry for the wait on that one!
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Right, so now we just have to wait for Brimmlocke!
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And for the @KnightofTempest. Although, I'm not sure what to do about him. I really like his character, but he hasn't been online for 4 days. I totally get that life gets in the way sometimes, but it still seems a bit unresponsible. I'll probably just give him another two days or so, and if I don't hear from him by then I'll just free up his spot.

@RPforthatPR There will be quite a lot of waiting in this RP, it seems :) But better to move slowly, than not at all. I hope you didn't expect this to be a speed posting kind of RP? 'Cause I'm afraid it's not :)

By the way, I draw another map for our RP. It's a sort of zoom-in of the area our characters are about to travel in the first few chapters. From Kirin Taq to the Myrruan forest. Let me now what you think :) I hope you recognize the cliffs XD I was having a hard time drawing them.


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Of course not, but still, faster paced. Oh well.
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@RPforthatPR Well, once you get involved in more than just one RP, or when you get to GM one (or more) - plus your real life starts to get in your way - you'll probably begin to appreciate the slow paced ones :D
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@RPforthatPR Well, once you get involved in more than just one RP, or when you get to GM one (or more) - plus your real life starts to get in your way - you'll probably begin to appreciate the slow paced ones :D


Full time work and marriage means I only have a certain allotted time a day to post, assuming my evening is not already booked up with family/friend visits. I can do OOC and read IC via my phone but posting is a bit more of time sink.
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I like the idea of combining powers by the way, though it would have to be one person controlling them, and maybe only two at a time. (Otherwise we could give Edgar all five stones and he could magic everyone to death) It could also be very, very taxing on the user and overuse could even lead to comatose/death


This is true. After all, his father was a good man at first.

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I apologized for the errors that I had. I totally rushed the revised edition of it, as I didn't want to keep you guys (and myself) waiting for far too long. But I have fisxed it, and even went to add visual descriptions for something such as the gem stone, and weapons and such.

As far as the powers go, there are still more I was wishing to add, but I don't want to over-cumber the list at the moment. And I was considering actually putting descriptions of each power as to not confuse the reader. I'll get to that another time though. =]

I'm going to start the post here shortly. Tending to an elderly is a daily routine for me right now, until I can land a job (which should be next week. Pray for me).
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@Brimmlocke I will check on your corrections later, I'm in a bit of a hurry now ;)

So, I decided we'll set foot on our journey, whether everyone makes it to the Kirin Taq or not (you'll learn why is getting there important in my next post). This might cause a bit of trouble for our characters, but they'll survive. :D

Anyway, I'm asking you to wait on Jinxer to reply first, since he is already working on his post. After that, the order shouldn't matter much. Just make sure everyone gets the chance to equally participate.
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Ill be sure to do that. Another thing; I just got a job today I've got rather long hours. I go into work at 2pm - 12 am. Ill make sure to try and post.
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Alright, it's been almost 10 days and still no word from @KnightofTempest, so I'm going to assume that he has no intention of returning to this RP. That being said, I'm going to free the spot for the Knight of Dragon mountains and his earth gem.
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The RP's dead in any case.
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Wow, that's some spirit. It's your turn to reply, anyway. But if you don't feel like participating anymore it's totally ok. Just let me now so I can free another Knight spot, and give somebody else a chance.
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It's a bit early to give up so quickly. I've seen you posting on a lot of threads and unfortunately many of us simply don't have the time to be quite so active; hence the apparent inactivity.

The reality is that this time of year RPs often move slowly anyway because the weather gets better (for a lot of people) so there's less incentive/time to be on this site. It's also not unusual for days to pass between posts in an Advanced RP.
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