[quote=@Reaper] Victor seems mostly okay. Some overlaps between him and Robin, but enough to be distinctive.[/quote] Robin seemed more like a spy, Victor's more assassin. Less trickery, more stabby. I can alter it some more if you'd like? [quote=@Reaper]The only real thing that's stopping me from accepting it outright is the bloodline ability. Bloodlines are basically inherited superpowers, but Victor's seems to be something anyone with sufficient medical knowledge would be able to pull off. [/quote] Then I wasn't clear, apologies. There is quite literally nothing about the human body he doesn't know. It's beyond medical knowledge, he's able to essentially know ANYONE'S biology from a glance. For example, two people in front of him, he can tell you that one has a weak heart that can be hemorrhaged with a heavy blow to the left side of the back, and that the other has weak knees that could be shattered with less force than it would take for a healthy person, with a glance and knowing nothing about them. He knows exactly how much your body can take before it gives out, regardless of mental fortitude, and he'll know exactly where to put a bullet/knife to paralyze your entire body *which by the way, goes beyond sufficient medical knowledge* The trick is if he misses, he's not a fighter. Hence, surprise attacks. Someone with sufficient medical knowledge, proper tools, and best case scenario could possibly pull off what he does if given the time and a lot of luck. He can always pull it off. Does that work better?