I appreciate the timely responses. I have taken everyone's comments into consideration, and I will address them separately and as thoroughly as I can.

[@Dinh AaronMk] I have redesigned my application. Not completely, but I did move the location north and reestablished it as a primarily horse-driven nation, which is honestly more appealing to me than my first application was.

[@TheSovereignGrave] Yes. Looking back on it it occurred to me how off that seems. It has been corrected.

[@Vilageidiotx] The Viking-esque appearance of my nation seems somewhat out of place. After typing out my latest application, I would rather go with that setup, as it makes more sense (at least, in my opinion) and is more applicable in the eastern environment that was already determined before I even arrived.

So, I have rewritten some aspects of my application, specifically the location, and for now I have dropped the longboats. They now reside on the east side of region 1. Furthermore, I have added a "Military" section to properly explain the Verigard's military power. For now they retain their Norse religion, and unless it becomes an impediment I would like to keep it that way. 

Thoughts?