Time to begin the overview of character sheets.

I get down to the little details when it comes to it, like the spelling of words; this is because of my intense OCD / perfectionism. I request these changes to be made before I accept your character(s), or if I have any questions / issues, we discuss them before posting in the Characters tab.

I'll also, uh, comment on stuff that I like a lot.

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[quote=@TwilightDragon]
[b]~Equipment~[/b]
 [u]Staff[/u],  Vulnerary x3
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Should be "Heal Staff" if that's what she has. Or "Mend Staff", and so forth.

[quote=@TwilightDragon]
[b]~Appearance~[/b] 
Her legs are long and toned from [u]travelling[/u] on horseback
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traveling*

[quote=@TwilightDragon]
[b]~Personality~[/b] 
It is not uncommon to think that a [u]Troubodour[/u] such as Aelia Theroux would have a sunny and upbeat personality, but she does not fit the common healer stereotype. She is brash and bitter and is not afraid of stating what's on her mind, no matter if people are likely to punch her in the face. When it comes to healing, her hands do not have the "tender touch" of other medics; she is rather rough with her patients and will often tell the ones who are making a fuss to be quiet. 

Despite being a sour woman most of the time, Aelia is known to stress and fret over the people who she cares about. Unfortunately, the stress only makes her become aggressive, rash, and even more blunt than she was before. She is known to charge headlong into battle to rescue a fallen comrade without a moment of thought during these times of extreme anxiety.

Surprisingly, there are instances of some people approaching Aelia to seek advice. Due to being painfully truthful and not holding back in telling someone they're being "idiotic" or "stupid", she is known to be a good consultant.
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troubadour*

The issue that I have with this portion pertaining to her status as a healer, the magic associated with healing is considered holy and would technically require a kindred spirit to operate in order to be effective.

It's similar to how, in order to master the fell arts of dark magic, the chances of the individual not succumbing to the fell arts itself would be near impossible, if the principle of light magic/healing requiring some form of purity would be applied.

[quote=@TwilightDragon]
[b]~Biography~[/b] 
Ever since Aelia was a small girl, she was the prized possession of her father. Being a member of House Theroux, a minor Cliacian noble family known for its [u]practioning[/u] in magic, her parents made sure that she was treated well by others. It was her father that taught her how to heal using staves while her mother showed her how to ride horses. She would become one of the many Troubadours that House Theroux raised as per tradition.

[u]Her father left the household to fight in a war when she was only six years old.[/u]

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[u]Unable to deal with living in the city any longer, Aelia left and moved north when she was twenty.
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practice*

The issue with your biography is that there has been no major war/conflict for a very, very long time, as mentioned in the first post. There have only been small disputes over land, which are just that; small disputes, that of which are not armed conflicts and end in brevity. Though this is a small detail, it seems to conflict with the entirety of your biography, so I'll leave it at that.

The biography should also detail up until the synopsis of the plot for Part I, where people are volunteering along with the army to stop the rebellion, and et citera.

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I actually only have time to do this one character sheet, but I'll see if I have time next block. If not, I'll be home in a few hours to continue working, but I guess you can say this is an example of how I analyze character sheets. :^)