Hey hey, just going to pipe in from my phone at work. I will note at the moment that I have not had the time to completely read through your NS, [@WanderingRebel], but I will offer what I have on the subject.

While in general I agreed with Skepic and the others' evaluation of the sheet regarding the flaws, I find myself a somewhat lenient God in this situation because deep down I know that we're all going to have our forces horribly murdered, regardless. Now of course it is bad form to explicitly say that any force in an NRP is the best in any aspect, I can appreciate the miscommunication is presented writing style for the application. I too have fallen into the trap of attempting to write a NS as a propaganda piece in the past and it is a truly difficult thing to do, especially without appopriate graphics and such, and as a result I would warn away from that style this time. 

I think what we failed to address isthe fact that your sheet is actually [i]really, really[\i] cool, so bear that in mind. At the end of the day it just needs some reworking in specific places to make their power a little more ambiguous. There are no strongest nations in this universe or the conflict would have been over long ago. 

Anyway, that's my input, I'll continue when I finish the sheet when I get out of this hellish work I hole.