[quote=@KaiserAuto]
>As grey as a pheonix.

I'm curious and also a bit interested as to how people feel about my writing:
Is it good, is it bad?
If it is bad, what should I improve on, etc.
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You're quite passionate about your works to say the least. I wouldn't think to be even able to attempt to write something as long. That said I enjoyed it myself, but I enjoy a lot of things and I'm not qualified enough to give criticism.