[@Cyclone] I am aware of some of my own grammar errors, but often times I am far too lazy to fix them.

I find great curiosity in witnessing your writing. 

Observing a style with such rich words and impervious metaphors places me at joys end. Whilst they are often times fluent and without worry, there are also times where the heavy use of metaphors brings the flow to a quick halt, forcing you to understand what you had just read. This is mainly due to the usage of such a rich vocabulary. Whilst it isn't a fault in itself, it brings the reader down and forces them to either learn the meaning of the word, or the meaning of the sentence.

However, in and of itself, for what I can say from my personal experience is that that doesn't bring me down. (Not trying to brag) That is probably due to my own vocabulary not being such a small decrepid place of malice and rundown filth (lol)

Like I was trying to say before I got lost in my own terrible sense of humor: I like it very much, however, understand that some who may not be as rich in word knowledge may not understand everything you voice through your writing.