[@KaiserAuto]
I'm flattered that you like my metaphors and wording; and here I was thinking that what I'd came up with so far was mediocre at best. As in for it being difficult to understand, thanks for pointing that out. I'll try to keep that in mind and not go overboard with the flowery phrasing, though admittedly I allow myself more slack on this type of RP than others because if somebody gets confused they can always just read the summary to make sure they understood the gist of what I was trying to communicate.

Admittedly I have a difficult time writing from the perspective of a nation, which is why I've been trying to write from Danr's perspective as much as possible.  

Speaking of difficulty understanding what I try to voice, something that's been bugging me as of late is that if I read my own work, I always feel that I need to break up my longer sentences. Of course I know what I am trying to say, but I often get the feeling that I've made a sentence so long that it becomes confusing to the point that someone would have to read it three or four times to understand. Sometimes my sentences just seem to stretch on and on for lines, yet breaking them up usually leaves me unsatisfied as the writing usually seems more choppy and the thoughts that I try to convey more fragmented. A good example of what I mean is the third sentence of this post. It's just...long, but I'd have difficulty breaking it into two sentences whilst somehow having a smooth transition and keeping the paragraph as a whole on topic. 

I'm interested in your thoughts, as I've seen you write some rather long ones yet I thought that they still flowed well. Do you think that I tend to ramble on and could do a better job segmenting some parts, or am I fine?