[@Cyclone] can you pinpoint me to the sentence?

Edit: OH.

Well, Cyclone, the trick is to not have dead space. rambling is a way to fill out space, but the space is dead and without importance. Therefore when writing one should have a ghoul with every sentence and kill any possible dead space found within it.

You can do that by removing unnecessary parts and decreasing the lenght of your sentences based on word necessity.

For instance:
Yesterday I saw a crocodile, it's tail was longer than the towers of Hababubabu and it's teeth were sharper than the sharpest knife- but one might not even understand the might of it's strenght, I think even I would be thrown by that thing!

could easilly be turned into:
Yesterday I saw a crocodile. It held a long tail and sharp teeth- and it's strenght was unparalleled.