[@Kurai Assassin] Even though the GM's approved your sheet, I for one would like to see more personality in your character than just three words. Give it a go, write a full paragraph, at least, and do the same for your character's weapon and his appearance; elaborate on them, expand, give us a clearer image than just a picture or a simple description. Oh, and also sort out the formatting of your sheet, like, properly separate the sections and everything. Everything else is good to go.

[@Rin Okumura] Your sheet's good, but that shade of blue's hard to read. Perhaps something lighter that isn't so eye straining? XD
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Gee I hope this RP doesn't accelerate too fast. I'm used to the slower pace in the Advanced forums, so being here in Free is kinda like going from a quiet country road to the bustling freeway.

Heh, s-see what I did there. Free, freeway, ahaha, ahehe, heh...I'm gonna go now.