Let's get those country names written correctly and not misspelled! :p

Sayuri is accepted; damn, she's taller than Jix, LOL.
Only question I have, she's not part of the volunteers, correct? If so, I assume she'll inevitably be caught up in the conflict?
Also, is it possible to get a better (and preferably, bigger) picture for her appearance? Thanks. :)

I don't think I saw any problems with Zieg, but it did remind me to include a new rule for In-Character.
Be realistic with your character's strengths and potential opponents' strengths. Sure, they can be random enemy soldiers or whatever, but your character isn't going to instagib five people in a two or three sentences, regardless of experience/strength.

This is going to especially apply for the first part, where our enemies are trained soldiers compared to our volunteers and some soldiers.

Anyway, Zieg is accepted.

EDIT: Innsert, I really like your characters, yo. She's accepted; she and Jix's surnames are off by one letter, too. :o