My only very, very, very minor nitpick with Ana is that her [s]Flash Step[/s] Speed Burst ability shouldn't use any "unique" form of mana. The more technical explanation should be that the specific magic circuit that the ability is made of can temporarily regain a small amount of mana very quickly, but it still takes the usual time for the temporarily regained mana to be absorbed into her true, deeper mana reservoir. So if Ana tries to use the ability without stopping, it'll rapidly eat into her real mana reservoir, and tire her out. This applies to all abilities that can only be used in short bursts, so you don't need to put in any justifications.

Other than that, your character is accepted. Welcome to the game! :)

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I made a minor edit to the description of the Evocation style of magic. I added that in most cases, no one else can use the abilities of your Evoked magic items, even if you want them to. And I clarified that if you put in a fragment of your soul to allow your Evoked item to detach from you, then it basically becomes a semi-sentient, independent magical artifact.

I also posted the profile of my first character, in the Characters section. Warning: Over [s]9000[/s] 4000 words! Yeah, I make long profiles all the time. [i]Very[/i] long profiles.