[quote=@Sep] W.I.P. Done the species and some overviews, how does it look so far? so I know if anything needs changed before I continue. [b]Name of Nation:[/b] Trak'Yull [b]Species:[/b] Same as Nation Name [hider=Species] [img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs42/f/2009/123/a/6/Grey_Alien_by_Zau_R.jpg[/img] The Trak'Yull are humanoid aliens. However their bodies are more lithe, they aren't capable of building up as much muscle mass as a human can and have eyes that if not protected are sensitive to to light not within the UV spectrum. While they can live in regular light the brightness is discomforting. Extreme flashes of light, while would only lead to temporary blindness in most species would lead to permanent blindness within the Trak'Yull. They themselves have longer live spans than humans ranging up-to 250 years and can heal far faster than the average human. The side effect that while they can heal from physical trauma more rapidly they are more susceptible to diseases and any internal trauma is unrepairable, only external trauma. Unless the wound is purposefully kept open will often heal without a scar unless there is an infection. The most definitive trait is the fact the females produce many off spring, largely male, via being "fertilized" by a male then laying hundreds of eggs. Though the species keeps itself in check as most of those born are male. What is most interesting is the hive mind they seem to share, which is their primary form of communication within certain distances it is also used for relaying orders down the chain from the various Queens that inhabit their planets or ships. [/hider] [b]Description of government:[/b] Religious Matriarchy [b]Description of military:[/b] Their military, in terms of ground forces composes of several ground beasts augmented with biological implants, as well as large forces of Raknor which are ape like creatures that reside on their planet. Semi-sentient biological implants allow them to be used essentially as drones via a telepathic link making them the commonly seen cannon fodder in conflicts between hives on the surface of the planet. Specialized forces do posses the Trak'Yull themselves as soldiers rather than leaders however due to their acrobatic prowess these rolls are highly specialized, and some are even given implants to help make them stronger. Naval forces consist of fleets each with a flagship that is ran by a Queen. There are roughly 25 fleets however more are being grown. Each fleet when given an objective is responsible for ensuring that it's own vessels follow the orders of the correct queen and that they don't interfere with operations ran by another. The fact that there is a hive link gives them uncanny precision and tactics for working together as they all essentially become one unit together however if that link is suddenly lost they would devolve into chaos. [b]Technological Overview:[/b] [b]Cultural Overview:[/b] [b][b]History:[/b] Other:[/b] [/quote] I don't know why, but I keep thinking of the Zerg when I read this XD Still, looking good tho