Johnathan is accepted, but I do have one minor concern. Since this is still planet Earth, the continent of Hellus has to be one of Earth's pre-existing continents renamed. It's only been two hundred years, unlikely for any significant continental drift to have occurred. Unless, of course, a group of powerful mages got together and reshaped a continent, which is also unlikely, since there aren't [i]that[/i] many of those epic-level mages around. You should clarify which continent Hellus actually is, or maybe just go back to using the regular continent name if the name change isn't too important.

There's also a bit of a problem with the Church of Remus. The existence of the Tech side was only known to the Magi a few months ago, when the two sides made contact. And the Church existed for ten years before that, so it must've had a goal [i]other[/i] than stopping the Tech side. You need to provide that goal before the faction can be logically consistent.

Also, a heads up to those of you who are worried that I might abuse overpowered characters. I'm going to make a second character, one almost as powerful as Evan; she has her own different reasons for being conflicted and doubtful regarding her powers. I will use this character and Evan together to explore the themes of power, altruism, and morality. The scope of their subplot should be mostly limited to themselves and the people they encounter; this will not result in the two of them trying to change the world together or anything. When the overarching plot emerges, I will make sure that my characters are limited to support roles at most, one way or another, and not steal the spotlight from the other player characters. So if any of you really find it hard to trust me to keep even one powerful character in check, you might as well leave now, because the doubt is only going to get worse. Until you actually see my characters in action, of course, but you aren't going to get that far unless you give me some trust to begin with.

I will also remind everyone again that at least a handful of those "epic-tier" characters, with power levels comparable to Evan and my upcoming second character, exist on both the Magi and Tech sides. For example, the leader of the Church of Remus is one such epic-tier character, as I've discussed with [@MelonHead]. You guys are all allowed to make epic-tier characters like these; you just need to discuss the idea in detail with me beforehand. Characters like these should take a back seat to the main player characters' conflicts, like Remus and my two characters, or they can be explicitly antagonistic toward some or all of the player characters. My epic-tier characters will be carefully played to not interfere with the story, so the same are expected of you if you make epic-tier characters of your own.