[quote=@The Mad Hatter] [@Drake Baku] I'm gonna be honest with you; I don't want to accept him. You already have one extremely powerful (the [i]most[/i] powerful) character that I am already a bit iffy about, but I allow out of the goodness of my heart. If I accepted this guy, too, you'd have the [i]two[/i] most powerful characters in the game and I just don't want that. I can't give you any good explaination as to why, but it just rubs on me the wrong way. You also have two characters who are able to "shut off their emotions", which is not only an extremely difficult thing to do and usually only happen with the help of some kind of psychosis, lots and lots of drugs or a serious alcohol intake, but also something that would make them into what we in daily speak would call "Super Soldiers". I have to make opponents for the Resistance to face that can match the level of those they have to fight. Usually, I'd make the antagonists as strong as the strongest protagonist and if I were to do that, only your characters would stand a chance since they are far ahead from the others, power-wise. If you were to fix him, I'd say the only way to do so IMO is to lose the "Kill Switch" to his emotions and the second power (Electrokinesis). However, as I attempt to be a fair and just GM, I ask the other players their opinions. This goes for any sheet, really. If any of you have an issue with anything (including my own characters, of course) don't hesitate to let me know. If you don't want the other players to know, you can stay anonymous by shooting me a PM instead and I'll take care of it. [/quote] Well, I hate to pile on, but since you've asked for our collective opinion I will offer mine. The character (drake) is most definitely overpowered. The CS says he only has one real power, but then goes on and on about his different powers. Shapeshifting into a dragon, accelerated healing, fire, lightning, etc. It's just way too much, especially when you compare it to the rest of the player chars who have very simple abilities. Second, the only REAL downside to all his power is that he must remain emotionless, which I can understand your reasoning behind but it makes for a really boring character to interact with. Lastly, your writing ability (and please understand I am simply stating my objective observation, this is not a personal attack) doesn't seem well honed, which means you probably lack the skill to somehow MAKE this character interesting to interact with, let alone two whom are similar. If anyone disagrees, please explain where I am wrong, but this is the way I see it. My advise would be to reduce the power, get rid of the emotionless concept and start from there. Perhaps in time he could unintentionally use some bigger ability because he let his emotions get away from him, then you have an interesting struggle of him trying to regain control over himself without losing what makes him human.