[@lydyn]: There are probably at least a few subtypes of elves, e.g. high elves, wood elves, dark elves. You might want to specify which type of elf your kingdom consists of. Also, I don't think your kingdom should be the [i]only[/i] major elven kingdom; maybe the other elven factions are made of other types of elves or something. The faction will be accepted after you make these minor changes.

[@MelonHead]: The one main problem with that is that modern technology pretty much died out completely in the past 200 years, due to the superiority of magic, and due to the lack of support in a post-apocalyptic world (e.g. no working phone signals or gas stations). If the Church of Remus was founded only ten years ago, it's unlikely for it to be based on hatred for something that should've died out long ago, unless their doctrine is based on making sure history doesn't repeat (e.g. not another nuclear war). And they'd also be against militaristic magical technology, and the technology that the Tech side uses. Is this good? If so, make the corresponding edits, and the faction will be accepted.

Oh, and Johnathan is accepted. You can post him under the Characters tab now.

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I've given my character another Evoked magical item, a cloak that hides his power level from detection. But as a consequence of how it works, the cloak also acts as a power limiter to him, preventing him from using any power above his displayed level (probably PC-level) unless he deactivates it and thus blows his cover. It will automatically deactivate if his body suffers mortal wounds. Obviously, Evan will be extremely reluctant to take off such a power limiter for pretty much any reason. This should help a bit in making sure he doesn't overshadow the PCs or ruin the plot.

My other character, almost as strong as Evan, will also have a similar power limiter, for similar reasons.