[@Satsuki]

There's a few sentences with repeated moments. These are the ones I noticed, since you asked for help.

- I will head to the local to that shop that sells the
- but Lancelot pulled forced her headdress down


I can't wait to see how Mulivon and Dulla-chan interact.

"Begone from the sight of the goddess thou daft fool!"
"You dare speak so insolently to the manifestation of death incarnate?!"
Simon - "Which one of you wanted waffles?"
"Me! Bring forth the syrup of the maple!"

[quote=@Queen Cobra]
You mentioned that Albert was controllable?
[/quote]

He is, just try and keep his personality and such in line with the description.