[quote=@ViolentViolet]
<Snipped quote by Silen Syanka>

It's not finished. Plus it needs to be formatted and made to be neater than it it is. When you put 'male' in the sexual preference spot you should be putting 'straight' or 'heterosexual'. At 100 lbs and 5'9 would make her extremely boney and with no fat on her bones. She'd essentially be dead so she wouldn't be that pretty either. I would also prefer that you had a picture as well, since you're description is  a little vague. You don't have a quote either. Silver is actually pretty pliable, did you know what? Phasing through anything is a little bit too much for my likes as well and controlling a human is already a vampire power. It's called 'Compulsion'. 

*clears throat* I think that's it right now. 
[/quote][@ViolentViolet]
So I decided that I'll join this rp after whatever happened on the 12th. Just so I don't leave anyone hanging or anything. So, I'll finish up the form than. Thanks for helping me out X3