[quote=@Kirah]
[@Maelvona] I like the idea of her. There's a few grammar errors. If you want this to be her first year I'd prefer she was younger.
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Sorry, it's a little late here, and I only did one-proofread. I wanted to get it out fast! As well as I don't think character sheets are the most important thing, a nice reference maybe, but characters really evolve past these things once you start writing them(in my perfectly honest opinion). I don't usually write like this, I assure you by the way, it's just writing an biography is different then acting out an character I feel.

Also, I used seventeen because no fifteen year old looks like that. However, to suit your needs, I will perhaps change it so she arrived to the school sooner, rather then later?