[@Partisan] I think Kanajiro is an okay character. Just one thing, really: I (And a few other people I talked to on Skype) don't exactly understand the power - mostly it's capabilities. Like, it's nice that you provided a description as to where it came from, but all of that isn't necessary (You could put that in a hider, or in the other section). I want to know details about the power itself, and what it's capable of. Like it's hardness, and any other trips.

[quote]At best, he could produce a toothpick sized crystal by crystallizing the air at his finger.[/quote]


Also, I don't think this is a good idea to start off being able to create this little.


[quote]However, he is most definetely a good friend despite his quirks and quietness. If you need him, he will be there, and he will sacrifice himself to prevent you from being negatively affected in anyway, and he won't expect anything in return. But that will require his friendship first.[/quote]


And I always found personality tidbits like this cringeworthy. Like, doesn't this go without saying if you're a [i]good friend[/i]?


He should be heavier too - like twenty pounds.