[@Wraithblade6]
So first off, you posted it in the wrong tab first. The Characters Tab is for accepted characters only. 

Second, he's very vague honestly. I know that a biography is not required - I personally hate bios so that's why - but if he's really 700 years old there must be more things to say about him. If you're going to add the biography, you should have fun with it a little bit. If he was an adviser to the Kings, how did that come to be? The Juran and all the other Pure Bloods look down on Turned vampires. Who turned him? Wtc.