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[@Bunnita]
I really don't know what to say to this.
First of, I'd perfer it if you would write in third person, rather than first person. There are times where writing in first person can work out well, but this is not one of them. The way you have written makes it hard to understand.
Once this is fixed, I will have another look at it.
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Hiii~~!!

Okay, I edited [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/2639890]muh charrie sheet [/url] to be more readable. Please let me know what else need to be changed for acceptance. Thanks ya^^!!