Clumsy - Lovely job. Give me a picture and you'll be set. If you need help finding one, I'll offer my skills to assist you. Read through my vamps CS so that you can see that you're not to far off from her, so I'll assume she created you if you're good with that. Not much time between my story and yours. 

"smells the stench, the blood – but perhaps most beautiful of all, the fear; that most exquisite of human emotions" <-- Awesome!! Loved this as my lips turned up into a pleased smirk.