[quote=Rin]
...Really should've taken the fact that it took so long to write up Sumire as a sign that this wouldn't work out. >.< But I don't want to screw over Vita... Gaaah. >.<
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I wouldn't stress out over post length so much. It doesn't necessarily matter how long the post is, as long as the dialogue and such stay true to your character and gives a key incentive to move the story along, then I see that post as good enough. No need to stretch it out so elaborately. ^_^