[quote=@Silver Fox] Maybe, but I still cringe at all the little mistakes I make xD. They'd probably be better written if I had a computer and Word. I do that all the time. Like with Edo-Karn. I felt bad when she was being a bitch xD. And cried a little writing up the flashback. Then I feel crappy for being a horrible person :D [/quote] Is it bad when I don't feel bad for being mean to my characters?