[@boomlover]Grammar mistakes do play a big part. The CS is the part where a person typically puts the most effort into yet yours was initially rife with mistakes and still has some even after your editing. [i] Decent grammar is critical for quality writing.[/i] It takes the joy out of rping when you're interacting with a person whose post is full of errors and poorly formatted. Second is the abnormal size/weight of your character. For example, a 190cm male has an average of 80kg. By comparison, your character makes no sense especially since he's buff according to your description. I do not understand what you mean when you say you don't know how to fix his height/weight when the values are obviously abnormal. Lastly, your post example simply did not pass the standard that I was setting for it. 

I'm sorry if I come off as harsh or anything. I'm simply rejecting your CS because I see problems that are likely arise in future if I accept it that will make rping less fun for you and others.