[@Rakurai] I'll get my IC post up in no more than a couple hours, probably. But first I have to do one for another roleplay I'm in were I'm making everyone wait for my turn so I may potentially delay until tomorrow morning, hopefully not.

Anyway, I'll use this opportunity to comment on [@Rakurai]'s comments. XD

First, I have to say that I'm glad that you liked the way Kotori is for now, 'cause it's really difficult to come with some of those answers, even though it's also fun. Having people acknowledge my effort is good.

About [@Karamonnom]Emilie and [@MelodyNoir]Ian, actually I really like to hang around those characters, their personalities being so different from Kotori's makes for fun RP opportunities, specially Emilie and her simpleminded nature are a good contrast to Kotori's enigmatic persona. Though, as soon as we arrive at a safe spot I'll put Kotori's isolationist tendencies at play.

[@Onarax] Brock, while I don't have any specific problem with 1st person narrative, I can see why others would get confused. Either way, yours is actually a good example of the practice, but just like Rakurai said, stating that you are writing from Brock's POV would probably help clear things out. Other than that, your character seems really neat so I want to see how deep he can be.

Last but not least,[@Crimmy]Brook I really want to get around that character even if just a little, 'cause Kotori is a loner. I really liked Brook's persona, but that's all I can say for now 'cause she's such a lazy bun that had done barely nothing more than sit and wait.

Edit: Corrected the bunch of mistakes on the text that I didn't saw at first, damn phone...