I think you did well making her bisexual because that's a new one in the RP. I like the touch of not being able to have children, too. Being a slave thing is also cool. She certainly went through a lot in her life, almost seems like a Micheal Bay movie at some point, take that as you will. 

I think, atleast in terms of equipment, you would do well to remove terms such as 'a good amount' since this is subjective and to anyone this could mean between 1 and 100. But I am not Fat Boy Kyle and I cannot approve or disprove of your character, this is just opinion since you asked for it.

[@Fat Boy Kyle] is slavery legal in Vahili? If so I have an idea for a character, if you'd allow me to have 2.