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Name: Shivani
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Appearance: She is large, being a [url=http://elderscrolls.wikia.com/wiki/Cathay-raht]Cathay-raht[/url], and wears steel armor, wields a pair of Dragonbone swords and can sometimes be seen communing with skyrim's native saber cats.
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Canon, AU, or OC?: AU
Universe of Origin: Elder Scrolls (Skyrim period)
Personality: Shivani is one of those khajiit that would rather be in heavy armor, swinging strong swords than sneaking. She's hard-headed and easily angered on certain topics.
Abilities/Weapons: [url=http://www.uesp.net/wiki/Skyrim:Dragon_Shouts]All Thu'ums[/url] except Bend Will, Frenzy and Dismay, as well as her natural claws and night vision. She wields a pair of [url=http://img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120814140252/elderscrolls/images/1/18/Dragonsword.png]Dragonbone swords[/url].
Backstory: Shivani was born in Elsweyr, trained from a young age to be quick and agile. She left home at 14 and ended up in skyrim 8 years later. While in Skyrim, she was nearly killed by Imperial soldiers, giving her a distrust of anyone loyal to the empire, nearly killed by a dragon but escaped with the help of a Stormcloak soldier. Throughout her adventure, she found out she was the Dragonborn. Soon after, she joined the Companions, became a werewolf, cured everyone else of theirs before her own, and still gave advice for them when not on another epic quest to find an item, explore a place, kill a bandit camp, etc. She eventually ended up in Riften and was approached by a man who thought she shouldn't have as much coin as she had. He offered her a job, which she declined with a yell to the supposed thief. She also made a friend with Keerava when another thief came to get some money. Shivani drew her swords, then only a pair of steel blades, and took her stance with a warning. With many more travels, she eventually got rid of the dragons, ended the war, found a few Daedric artifacts (Azura's Star, Dawnbreaker, Ebony Mail, Sanguine's Rose, Savior's Hide, Skeleton Key (returned to proper place), Spellbreaker, Volundrung and Wabbajack) and either stored them in her armory in her house in Solitude or returned them to their proper places, stopped a vampire invasion and defeated an evil Dragonborn. With all her great feats, the Jarls all selected her, despite the jealousy of Jarl Ulfric Stormcloak, to be High Queen. However, she quickly tired of the life of the royal and called the Jarls together in a Moot to select a new High King or Queen, suggesting Jarl Balgruuf of Whiterun as her choice. With little care of who the new High King or Queen was, she left to begin her life of adventuring again, visiting her wife and daughters in Solitude as often as she could. While on one of her adventures for Jarl Siddgier, she found herself in a new world. The walls were made of stone and there were many things glowing, making noises and what seemed to be a tiny sun in the ceiling.
Faction: None