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 Thank you!
Haha yea, it comes across that way, but I decided to give some more info on how she was feeling, etc. I felt that I hadn't really touched base with her emotional level, or how the destruction of the city really affected her. She may seem carefree and aloof, but she's been alone for so long. It's like an inner battle, trying to stay happy when everything is going to shit around her. Lol I'm rambling now.


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No, I totally got all of that from the post. Well done, as I said.