[@Kal-El] True that. I learned that in Biology. lol. Anyway, I have my character done. I might have a few grammar mistakes in it. [@Partisan] I'll love to hear some tricks to editing your writing. I couldn't spot any mistakes in your character sheets. [hider=Daiki Naito][center][img]http://i.imgur.com/MkQn9bG.jpg[/img] [i]“Ninja ... I'm still wondering what that means.”[/i] [b]Cream skinned and rather charming to look at, Daiki has been known for his fierce, if not antagonizing appearance. His sharp features leaves other guessing if he's from nobility or was lucky enough to catch those genes from beautiful parents. His hair has been described as “red” by many but in all honesty, its more of a dark auburn. His gold eyes can range from vivid yellow to a dull bronze in certain lights. Though, the brighter they are the more spectacular they seem. Daiki stands at a height of five-eight, leaning towards five-nine. When he goes out, he is usually dressed in simple clothing. Seeing as most clothes appear rather well on his athletic build. Most of time he holds a very condescending countenance on his face. His forehead protector is tied around the belt on his waist and occasionally will be tied around his forehead. At the moment his ninja gear consists of a white, high-collared, long-sleeve jacket and a steel shoulder guard wrapped around his right upper-arm. Underneath that is a dark blue shirt that falls above the leather black belt on his waist; his black headband and gray sheathe usually hangs from it. He wears baggy, knee-length, black trousers that form tightly near his ankles and are tucked into high-rising sandals.[/b][/center] [u][h3]Personnel files.[/h3][/u] [i]Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.[/i] [indent]【[U]Full Name[/U]】 [I]Daiki Naito[/I] 【[U]Alias[/U]】 [i]Konoha's Fierce Dog[/i] 【[U]Age[/U]】 [i]16[/i] 【[U]Gender[/U]】 [i]Male[/i] 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】 [i]Konohagakure[/i] 【[U]Bloodline[/U]】 [i]Naito, a somewhat disgraced albeit once famous clan. Now they are known for their good looks and “take no prisoners” attitudes.[/i] 【[U]Rank[/U]】 [i]Chūnin[/i][/indent] [u][b]Combat reports.[/b][/u] [i]Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.[/i] [indent]【[U]Fighting style[/U]】 [i]A rather impressive combatant, Daiki is a all-out, no-hold-bars, combatant. His strength lies in his mindset. He never holds back against his opponent and has never spoken the words “I underestimated you” because of it. His calculating mind, along with his weapon Anemone: a large hand-a-half sword, has placed him among the top when it comes to offensive combat. He is a short-range fighter by nature and while quiet, is wholly confrontational, he could care less for who it is he's fighting.[/i] 【[U]Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit[/U]】 [b][u]Bloodline limit name:[/u][/b] [I]The Sharingan also known as “Heaven's Eye” grants the user four abilities. The first is the ability to see and differentiate chakra by the individual. The second is an almost unparalleled clarity of perception. As the Shargain evolves so does its abilities. The third ability it bestows is the skill to copy other ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu. Other Kekkai Genkai is impossible to copy due to its blood requirements. And the final ability that falls onto its users is its own unique brand of genjutsu, which through experience and practice can become even more useful.[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]In use the Sharingan turns the users eyes crimson with black tomoes encircling the pupils. As the user grows more tomoe appear, eventually leading up to its final result of having three tomoes. Its thought that even further growth can occur through hardship and traumatic, taboo, experiences.[/i] [b][u]Strengths:[/u][/b] [i]The Sharingan's abilities are legendary, producing trepidation in even the most confident of foes. The reasons for this is obvious. As versatile as it is, the Sharingan gives its user insight to many things in a ninja. Their tendencies in battle, a clear sight through genjutsu, and an advantage amongst those that are not clever in their combat. At the moment, Daiki has only managed to achieve the second stage.[/i] [b][u]Weaknesses:[/u][/b] [i]The Sharingan is a excellent bloodline jutsu but it is not an almighty equalizer. And if anything will produce pompous shinobi into the world. Inherently the Sharingan has no weaknesses, only weak hosts. The only weakness it truly has is the capability of being ripped out and the meager continuous drain on chakra that its users experience.[/i] 【[U]Ninja techniques[/U]】 [u]B rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Wave]Wind Release: Vacuum Wave.[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Clone_Technique]Shadow Clone Technique.[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Sphere]Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere[/url][/i] [u]C rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Great_Breakthrough]Wind Release: Great Breakthrough.[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release%3A_Great_Fireball_Technique]Fire Release: Great Fireball[/url] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release%3A_Phoenix_Sage_Fire_Technique]Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire[/url][/i] [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Dragon_Fire_Technique]Fire Release: Dragon Fire[/url] [u]D-E rank techniques:[/u] [i]Basic jutsu[/i] 【[U]Custom made techniques[/U]】 [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i]Futon: Crazed Aeolus[/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]A[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Short[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]Daiki uses Anemone, a rather large broadsword, and surrounds it with red wind chakra. The chakra that's spewed from this blade is tuned to a fine edge, allowing him to cut through other chakra construct and jutsus. It goes without saying that if contact with flesh was to happen, it would cut through like a heated knife to butter. This jutsu takes up a bit more chakra than the usual but thanks to his chakra control, Daiki can use it for quite a bit.[/i] [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i]Futon: Wind Skin [/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]B[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Short[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]Daiki uses Anemone to concentrate his wind-type chakra on the flat of his blade, where a thin, invisible wall, savagely whirls. This allows his blade to deflect attacks that comes his wall. Projectiles are usually tossed aside and physical contact will take skin and twist muscles before bouncing the attack back. This, tacked on with Crazed Aeolous, can drain him quickly.[/i] 【[U]Weaponry, tools and objects.[/U]】 [b][u]Weapon, tool or object name:[/u][/b] [i]Anemone[/i] [b][u]Weapon, tool or object type:[/u][/b] [i]Broadsword[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]Anemone is a five-foot long broadsword that Daiki carries on his side at all times. The dark sapphire-colored blade is made of a durable and chakra conductive material. Its hilt is wrapped in black leather, its pommel is adorn with a crystal diamond, and its guard flares out before curving down to block other weapons. The blade is capable of cut through sheet metal easily when not infused with chakra but has a hard time piercing heavy armor with straight thrusts. [/i] [b][u]Weapon, tool or object type:[/u][/b] [i]Wire Strings[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]Durable and deadly.[/i] [b][u]Weapon, tool or object type:[/u][/b] [i]Shurikens[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]In stock.[/i] [b][u]Weapon, tool or object type:[/u][/b] [i]Kunais[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]In stock.[/i][/indent] [u][b]Psych. report.[/b][/u] [i]Medical secrecy applies.[/i] [indent]【[U]Personality[/U]】 [I]Daiki is a quiet young man, somewhat lazy, and often considered snobby. This however is unjust and to him too unkindly to be taken seriously. In actuality he is just a confused man with a large burden on his shoulders. His thoughts pester him, bug him with the moral rights and wrongs of being a shinobi. He often considers a different profession but knows that its impossible. Elders tend to praise his, kind albeit soft-spoken heart. He has, since he was little, walked old ladies across the street without a word. Returned pets without even asking for a reward. And gone so far as risking injury to defend others from bullies, be them kids or adults in general. His grades are moderate, his training excellent, and his missions are always successful. Some because he abandoned trusted comrades to die, killed them off himself, or simply betrayed those that he didn't needed. Like his clan, this leads others to avoid him. Often seeing him as dog simply looking for a way to feed himself. Which isn't true, the Naito Clan is just willing to do what others are not. Living with such a clan has instilled in him a rather brutish, meager capacity for disrespect. When approached by someone willing to bash him; he openly accepts and will bite without warning.[/i] 【[U]History[/U]】 [I]Like the first drop of ink on a clean paper, Daiki's beginnings started off smudged in darkness. The first few years of his life was spent in the Naito compound, all but imprisoned in the shadows of the other members. His mother, who was the daughter of the head, kept a watchful eye over him. A steely and dead gaze that kept him tense throughout the years. The only time he felt safe was when he was visited by a hooded man. A man who walked with absolute confidence and moved in complete and utter silence. Others often stepped aside for him and grew quiet when he spoke. This man always introduced himself as “Mentor” and demanded, with a firm and gentle hand, obedience from Daiki. For years, Mentor came and left as he pleased, often carrying a solemn air around when they were alone … The feeling was so dense when they were alone. At the age of six the visits ceased. When he enrolled into Base School, his place in the Naito Clan had already instilled a hyper-sensitivity in the youth. He was often in trouble for getting into fights with others over the Naito Clan's stained past. When things grew unpleasant in his home because of this, he found the ability to ignore everyone. This came at the cost of seeming disinterested in everything else. His grades were adequate and more often than not, sparring was ended quickly and brutally with other students; separating him from his peers even further. He became a Chunin at the age of thirteen. That same night, as he walked the compound of his home after the festivities, he felt the chill of a superior ninja behind him. When Mentor had spoken, it melted the cold barrier he had fixed upon his face all those years. The two shared their collective experiences over the years with relative cheer before the man had grew serious. He pulled back his hood and revealed a pair of Sharingan deep into his almond sockets. Without his hood, Daiki could see the shaggy, auburn hair that sat on top his head and knew then, that the man was of some kin to him. The man explained that he was his uncle and that his Uchiha father was dead. After talking for hours about his paster, Mentor returned to his cheerful self, and after agreeing to keep it mostly secret, promised to teach him the ways of the Uchiha. Daiki asked him why he had to keep it secret but Mentor only replied. “Some of us are lost. I want to keep you on the path, unfiltered.” In Highschool, Daiki experienced a rather hasty growth spurt in abilities. It was hard to explain to others but awakening his Sharingan had been a blessing … and a curse. Mentor oversaw his training dutifully but over time it seemed urgency hastened him, putting strain on the relationship the two of them shared. At school, some things remained the same. He was still alone and often, with but a glance, considered feral or dangerous.[/i] 【[U]Family ties[/U]】 [i]The Naito Clan is rather scarce and tense. They present the utmost loyalty to the head family and its direct kin, seeing them as role models and idols. They all carry the same stern look in there eyes, as if beaten without cause and ready to bite back. Daiki's family was stressful in the beginning. He only found shelter with Mentor. But once he left, his mother, aunt, uncle, cousins, and grandparents warmed up to him rather nicely. Now with Mentor back, the two oppositions often fight over his time and duties. Though neither are willing to actually confront the other about it.[/i] [b]Nariko Naito | Mother | 24, Konohagakure, Head of the Naito Clan and a Author, Its said she can end any debacle with a single glance. [/b] [b]Hisato Naito | Grandfather | 67, Konohagakure, Retired Ninja, The man has a intense love for origami but hates rain. [/b] [b]Seiichi “Mentor” Uchiha| Uncle & Sensei | 22, Unknown, Wandering Ninja.[/b] [b]Yoshio Naito | Cousin | 20, Konohagakure, Student at an abroad college, Yoshio is against being a ninja, finding the tradition old and “not trending”.[/b] 【[U]Dreams and fears[/U]】 [i]Confusion wracks his brain furiously but he finds if he can quiet it, if just for a second, he wishes to simply be happy. How will he obtain it is a mystery to him, one shrouded behind the mist of his own hesitance. Fears are exactly the opposite. To be lost in his baffling fog forever, to be guided through life not of his own will, and to never be capable of fighting back against his herders is pretty scary to him.[/i][/indent][/hider]