[@Balthazar007], extremely sparse. Personality details are more sparse than I'd like, but I get the gist, barely.

Background is very lacking. What was his childhood like? What about his mother? What about his brother and father? None of them are explained in anything more than a passing detail. There is no detail about when, where, and how he learned any of his abilities, or how he interacted with them, or the town around him. What sort of experiences has he had? How long has he been learning magic from? Why did his father bother teaching him if he paid no attention to him? It needs some work.

Skills are fine, or they will be once they're explained or implied more clearly in the background. 

It is implied that the dagger is made of normal steel, and can cut, so the 'metal' and 'sharp' qualities are unnecessary, unless the dagger is particularly sharp, or particularly metal *Headbang rockerfist* Also, [i]vials[/i], not viles.