[quote=@Prince of Seraphs] I did follow all of the prompts specifications to the letter of the law, however I may have been a bit liberal with spirit behind the prompt. The idea was that the portal does appears before you and the kid immediatly introduces themselves as your kid. While that was the implication is was only actually stated that the portal appear near your character which it did. Also I have about three drafts where the portal appears before Swansong while they're training and given Sapphire's personality I couldn't find any ways in which Demetri was able to get three words out before Swansong kicked his ass three ways to sunday. Given the Incident and that it was caused by KPT telling the Order how to open portals into Beacon a portal appearing before them would naturally be assumed to have come from them, Demetri walks out, Demetri is unconcious before he can explain. And I couldn't exaclty have him beat Swansong cause in order to beat a fully equipt just about to graduate hunters team he'd have to be the same level of skill as someone like Ozpin and even considering how he grew up I couldn't see that happening. I had to introduce him more graduatlly to avoid violence since that's sort of Sapphire's first reaction to a lot of things. [/quote] I see where you're coming from. Do you want to try to negotiate with either the winner or the runner-up for their position?