[quote=@Inlaa] Thread's looking good so far. I had to make a few edits to my own post after the fact (realized that Asturias never said what the 'bad news' was). But I'm eager to see where this goes. EDIT: And made one last change to fit what someone else wrote. Still works. [/quote] That's fine. If you edit major changes or for continuity just mention it OOC. For everyone else, If I mention something like an attack without telling who the culprits are-anyone can claim it as their factions actions in there next IC post. (if you want to)