[quote=@Ellri]

Flagg There are still some things that need to be fixed in Callidus before he is approved.

First of all. Appearance. Fallen really wants to know how tall he is. Would her characters look him in the eye, or would they stare at his thin chest? Is there anything else of note about his appearance?

Secondly. Imperial intelligence and the Sith tend to quarrel a bit and want to outdo each other. What is the reason Callidus is an exception to that? Try to work that into his lore. Was perhaps his first master deeply involved in Imperial Intelligence? 

Thirdly. This refers to the PM we sent you a while ago. With his being undercover in the republic, any stronger Jedi that came near him would normally have sensed his true nature as a practitioner of the Dark Side, even if they could not readily pinpoint the source as being him. That would have been rather unfortunate. Neither the Sith he served nor Imperial Intelligence would have made such a grievous mistake. Thus we actually recommend that he is trained in Force Stealth, which would allow him to hide his nature in the Force from others.

Later, whenever he came into the service of Darth Nyiss, he would perhaps have repositioned to Coruscant, where he could not only aid her goals, but also provide better intel to the Empire. When she became aware of the Sacking, he would probably have been instructed to lay the local groundwork for Nyiss’ own project in the Sacking. If he through that role also came into good relations with a number of the captives-to-be, the unveiling of his true nature might be… unsettling… to them.

His good service undercover might even be part of how he rises (or rose) to the rank of Sith Lord.
The changes suggested above imply that he is not discovered by the SIS or the Jedi.

Fourthly, you should add some more relations. We’d suggest some with a few Jedi as well as with a Sith or two.
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[@Ellri] Extensive adjustments made to the CS, let me know what you think.