[@Knight of Doom] - He seems pretty cool, though of course the assassin part throughout makes me a bit cautious... and for that reason and just because it leaves tons of questions unanswered, I'd like his back story expanded. I'd like to know why his father killing his mother would've ever pleased the king... like, what reason was that for? Did he not love his wife, even a little?

More questions are things like, what was his life as an assassin? Did he grow to resent his position? I'd image so... someone who hates hurting others, being forced to kill? With being such a master in stealth, why didn't he just run away? I mean, if I were him, I'd almost hate the king and my own father for forcing me to kill people... even if there was a reason to advance the crown - if fact I'd be against killing anyone that helped the royal family in spite and run away at any chance I got.

Third, what trial did he suffer through to get Jergal's blessings? As it stands... there's really nothing speaking for this like the others. So please work on the back story some more. ^.^

[@Irisity] - That would work. It just seems she is less of a bandit herself and more of a gypsy, because she's really not that mean or greedy (maybe bitter though).