[@Raijinslayer] - A few things that need to be tweaked, though I do like the character a lot. The first thing that came to mind is that he is an expert or master in several areas (magic, fighting, and endurance) but really only has one flaw of being unable to deal with long-ranged individuals. I'd like to see something else, if you don't mind to even that out. Second is a couple of his spells. The time one wouldn't exist... I understand it's not very powerful, but there's really no such thing as time magic when it comes to Weave Magic. Even in small doses, it's far too powerful. Second is the wall of earth... it'd need to be around 4 feet wide and 4 feet tall - anything bigger is normally beyond Weave Magic. His ability to not suffer cuts is a bit too much as well, sadly. Maybe his skin can be as tough as an orge's? Or a bit more so? They have tough hides too and cuts and arrows don't sink in nearly as much - but it doesn't make them immune. Also his quick analyze power - as long as we can agree that even if he knows a weakness, he may not be able to physically himself take advantage of said weakness, then it's fine. The last bit is something in his back story. Jergal would've likely waited until just after he spared the Griffin's life, as it truly shows determination and resolve of his heart against such terrible emotions as anger and revenge. So he might have gotten a few wounds to lick, haha... but he could've survived, especially since Griffins are gentle and it would only want him to go away and likely wasn't attacking to kill.