[quote=@ViolentViolet] [@Zoghor] *proceeds to save to USB stick for future use and delete my post* [/quote] Now, now, don't be silly. Also, I'm going to go right ahead and bet £50 that you put the USB in the wrong way up first. Anywho, If we look at what you have, it essentially holds water. However, your super-super powers need to be clipped, otherwise you'll create the paradox that I mentioned in the rules. So your Goddess is there to stop her children from running amok. And probably, to also protect them from harm, yes? I have no qualms with someone playing one of the Creator's spouses, by the way. I imagine he may have had a few? Who knows. So the main beef we've got is that you can strip a God of their powers and immortality, effectively making them non-Gods. It seems you can do this at a whim. How about we have it, that you can only do this kind of thing to [b][u]ONE[/u][/b] God at a time? You know, if one started getting uppetty, you'd step in and put them in the naughty chair. However, to check your power, and to stop you from rivalling the Creator himself, the amount of concentration/strength required to cripple another God, means you cannot do it to more than one at any given time. Alternatively, how about being able to banish them temporarily to their Realms? Forcing them to break through your prison before they can get back into the physical world - but again, you could only do this to one God at any one time. This way, the other Gods at least have the option of teaming up against you if you start trying to take over the Pantheon. See, it's all about moderation and constructive compromise. Thoughts?