[quote=@Frettzo]
I suggest developing his introduction a bit more. Take as an example what the rest of us have been doing as intros. You might want to follow suit for a tiny while before creating your dragons. 
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My thoughts exactly.

I know the GMs have placed no official restriction on our god's beginnings- and it's rightly so that they haven't- but I can't help but feel we had a wonderful pattern and flow going on, and then the thing with the dragons...and something about stars...it doesn't seem to fit or make as much sense as the others.

That just my personal opinion, however, and should be taken as no offense to ActRaiser. I've seen Act's writing before, back in the OldGuild, and it is very good, but this just didn't set well with me